The given chart illustrates the proportion of adults of various age groups who surfing the internet on daily basis in an England during 4 years from 2003 to 2006.
It is evident from the chart that the 60% people of 16-24 age group spent their time on Internet daily in the year 2003 as well as 2004. In addition to it, maximum users of Internet were observed in 2005 (almost 70%) which was slightly more than the users in 2006 (approximately 65%). On contrary, Internet used by adults of the age group 25-44 accounts for substantial growth with the year that was under 60%.
Besides this, in 2003, 40% adults used the internet everyday whereas, in the next three years, the per centum of internet users remained almost same which was 50%. Moreover, the percentage of 55-64 age group who using the internet went up over the given period with slight fluctuations and reached to almost 40% in the last year. However, people of age more than 66 were less users of internet over the period.
Overall, it can be clear from the chart that adults of early age group were surfing the internet more as compared to elder people ,while chart shows erratic trend along the period in the UK.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
..., in 2003, 40% adults used the internet everyday whereas, in the next three years, the p...
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Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun users is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...owever, people of age more than 66 were less users of internet over the period. Ove...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ge group were surfing the internet more as compared to elder people ,while chart s...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nternet more as compared to elder people ,while chart shows erratic trend along th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, moreover, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59241706161 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18582597178 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.116715765 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437892983788 0.215688989381 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191781239019 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877100768319 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281346614805 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361287506884 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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