The supplied bar graph provides the proportion of families lived as a tenant and those who have their own accommodation, over a ninety-six-year period from 1918 to 2011, in England and Wales.
Overall, it is quite apparent from the graph that families have shown less interest in rented accommodation with the progression fo time till 2001, whereas households in owned accommodations showed an upward trend in the same period, but both experienced their inverse trends in the last decade.
To begin with, In 1918, landlord families were about 20% whereas the proportion of rented was approximately one-forth, which is the highest figure of all. Thereafter, rented people lessened their interest and their percentage reached just below 70%, however, landlords' proportion increased slightly by 10 percent in 1939, however, thereafter, the percentage of both remained the same till 1953.
Again, they both started to show their usual trends, households owned and rented reached up to (40% and nearly 60 %) respectively. Then, after a decade both became the same in percentage. From 1981 to 2001 rented people decreased gradually approximately up to twenty percent, while landlords rose to the same proportion. Finally, both showed a reverse trend and tenant became about 35% and owned-accommodations families approximately 6% by 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, then, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50241545894 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11401545769 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9936381038 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171364955097 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753135992924 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426993248628 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105132781341 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145671622001 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.