The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Submitted by emdy29 on Fri, 02/11/2022 - 08:32

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales from 1981 to 2011.
At first glance, at the beginning of the chart, the percentage of households in rented accommodation significantly outweighed the one in owned accommodation. However, at the middle of the period, both figures reached the equivalent quantity. From 1981 to the end of the chart, the households in owned accommodation outraced the rented accommodation.
Firstly, in 1981, the households in rented settlement pattern was at the highest point at around 78% while the one in owned home was only about 23%. From 1918 to 1961, there were some fluctuations in rented accommodation percentage but generally the figure showed a downward trend and dropped by approximately 20%. Whereas, the owned settlement increased stably to over 40% in 1961. In 1971, both patterns remained same percentage at 50%. Nevertheless, from 1981 to 2011, while the households amount in owned accommodation represents an significant upward trend and inclined to nearly 65%. On the other hand, the other figure fell to about 36% at the end.
In summary, both patterns experienced some fluctuations but the chart showed a reverse trend of both percentage of households in owned accommodation and the rented one.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...trend and dropped by approximately 20%. Whereas, the owned settlement increased stably ...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...mount in owned accommodation represents an significant upward trend and inclined t...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, in summary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32367149758 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17677574412 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5131165173 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271443342111 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123224031992 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105030602227 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227421376392 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798022769697 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...trend and dropped by approximately 20%. Whereas, the owned settlement increased stably ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...mount in owned accommodation represents an significant upward trend and inclined t...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, in summary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32367149758 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17677574412 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5131165173 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271443342111 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123224031992 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105030602227 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227421376392 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798022769697 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.