The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.
The flow chart outlines the way in which waste paper is recycled.Overall,it is clear that there are six consecutive stages in this process,from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper.
At the first step of the paper recycling process,waste paper is collected either from paper banks,where members of the public leave their used paper,or directly from businesses.this paper is then sorted manually and separated according to its grade,with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed.Next,the graded paper is then transported to a paper mill.
The two consequent stages of this process both involve cleaning.Firstly,the paper cleaned and pulped,and foreign objects such as staples are taken out.Following this,all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage.Finally,the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine,which makes the end product:usable paper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64583333333 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61270664538 2.65546596893 136% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9235654686 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 271.0 112.824112599 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 22.9334400587 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311491211751 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23665312167 0.103423049105 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634613216308 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23665312167 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634613216308 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.2329268293 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.06136585366 139% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.