The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of coffee and tea consumption within five different Australian cities.
Overall, the data of residents utilizing coffee from the last 4 weeks recorded the lowest rate, while the figure for people in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart who went to a place serving coffee or tea in the last 4 weeks reached a peak of the chart. However, the Adelaide citizens preferred buying instant coffee to going to a café shop in the last 4 weeks.
It is immediately apparent that in Sydney where people are supremely enjoy having a coffee or tea in a cafe shop, at 62%, while the figure for buying fresh coffee from the last period of 4 week registered the percentage of 43%. In addition, there were 46% of Sydney citizens who use instant coffee. The data of coffee and tea bought in Melbourne was having a similar pattern to Sydney. The proportion of people in Melbourne who went to a cafe accounted for 63%. Furthermore, the figures for citizens who bought instant coffee and fresh coffee were responsible for 47% and 44%, respectively.
On the other hand, the fresh coffee was less attractive to residents from Brisbane , Adelaide and Hobart with just 33%, 34% and 38%, respectively. Nevertheless, people in Brisbane and Hobart had a resemble habit of going to a cafe shop, with the highest percentage, at 51% and 62%, respectively. By contrast, Adelaide citizens tended to prefer buying instant coffee to having coffee or tea in a cafe shop. Therefore, the figure for was given at 50% and 49%, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... fresh coffee from the last period of 4 week registered the percentage of 43%. In ad...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ss attractive to residents from Brisbane , Adelaide and Hobart with just 33%, 34% ...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...less, people in Brisbane and Hobart had a resemble habit of going to a cafe shop, with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, therefore, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7402930725 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465909090909 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6345647642 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203554253518 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859347861262 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651493528732 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153661130018 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461766906735 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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