The bar chart illustrates the worth of transfer in 5 different categories in a particular country and makes a comparison between 2015 and 2016.
What stand out is that although Textiles had a least transfer earning according to the chart, They raised more than any other categories throughout a year. it is striking that by 2016, Gems and Jewellery had gone through the drop which is 5,18%.
Another significant point is that among 5 categories Petroleum products have the most export in terms of value of goods which is approximately 61 and 63 Billion Dollars in 2015 and 2016 respectively. By 2016, Agricultural products had failed to have a huge impact of exporting value which just 0,81 at last.
Finally, Turning next to Engineered goods, The second rank of valuable exports between 5 categories which raised values exactly 8,5 throughout a year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...stand out is that although Textiles had a least transfer earning according to the...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...any other categories throughout a year. it is striking that by 2016, Gems and Jewe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06338028169 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82461092886 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3635876762 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250795960137 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122484726629 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590722144651 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148816673621 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564843232603 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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