The bar graph illustrates levels of air pollution caused by three different factors for four different countries in 2021.
Overall, China experienced the highest emission of air pollution through all three causes, whereas Australia shows the lowest through two factors, transport and industries, and second-lowest generated through electricity generation.
At the outset, in Australia, the air pollution level was almost the same for all three reasons, which is almost 18 ppm. The lowest level of air contamination ejected by electricity generation was in Japan among other countries, which is just 4ppm lesser than that of Australia. But the country emitted the second-highest level of pollution through industries, which is the highest affecting factor within the country as well.
When it comes to America, it deteriorated the air quality to almost 30 ppm through each of both generations of electricity and industries. Whereas vehicle transportations contributed the most to lowering down the air quality for America, which was approximately double the pollution level of industries. However, China noticed that the lowest polluting activity was electricity creation, which was almost equal to the highest element of America. The other two elements generated 10 and 20 ppm pollutants higher than the electricity generations. At an overall level, china is accounted for the highest pollution emission.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67924528302 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07782928504 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2089542266 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184475591865 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914857277131 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822674461067 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15414620395 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103068185851 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.