Given is a bar chart illustrating the change of 2 industries including IT industry and Service Industry in the UK over the period 8 years since 1992.
In general, it is evident that the data on IT industry and Service industry was an upward trend. Besides, the figure for IT industry was higher than that of Service industry.
As can be seen from the chart, concerning IT industry, the data made up 6% at the beginning of the period and it increased dramatically to 12 % in 1998, which was doubled comparing to the beginning. There was a slight rise to appximately 15% for the rest of the period.
Regarding Service industry, in 1995, aforementioned industry accounted for 4% and it witnessed a steady growth to 8% at the end of the period, which was a half the data on the initiating.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, regarding, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64539007092 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82776952737 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3119544226 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569528867473 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282264509812 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323592481451 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386236436621 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281436630007 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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