The given chart elucidates the gross domestic product of the UK from 1992 to 2000. This mainly includes two industry i.e IT and Service Industry.
Overall, the IT industry in 1992 put 6% of the wealth in the country’s GDP and Service industry contribute 2% lesser. In the year 1994, the rate of share increased by 2.5% in both sectors. Comparatively, the IT sector faced a downfall in their contribution of 0.5%, while the service industry gets 1% increased in the income in the year 1996.
After 1996, the IT industry rapidly increasing and its potential of adding to the GDP growth has been changed to 12% from 6% which was in 1992, it doubles in 1998. In addition, the service industry remains unchanged in the same year. Furthermore, lastly, the IT sector holds the highest share on GDP growth, which across the 15% of the share and the service sector stays at 8% in 2000.
Therefore, the IT industry has confronted the gaining rate of a portion which gets doubled in 2000 and service industry looked up for average rate of portion in the GDP of the UK.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, lastly, look, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68253968254 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59733935398 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7156920155 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124019406623 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058184693566 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598867712147 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927701361291 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552961358277 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.