The two bar charts represents yearly rainfalls and temperatures in Brasilia and Recife, two cities both located in Brazil.
From the first graph we can observe that rainfalls in Brasilia have a bimodal distribution. They have their peak from October to March, when a mean of about 200 mm of rain usually falls. In contrast, summer months face the lowest precipitations' amount. In addition, temperatures in Brasilia have a broad range of presentation, varying from a minimum of around 0° C in June, to a maximum of almost 40° C in the early autumn.
The second chart illustrates a contrasting situation in Recife. Rainfalls here distribute in a bell-shape, with their maximum values reaching almost 250 mm in summer, and their minimum values in the late autumn. The temperatures' range is more constant and hotter than the one seen in Brasilia. The lowest measurement can be observed in July, assessed slightly under 15° C, whereas all other months have a definitely hotter climate, consistently above 30° C.
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The two bar charts represents yearly rainfalls
The two bar charts represent yearly rainfalls
two cities both located in Brazil.
two cities are both located in Brazil.
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