The given diagrams illustrate the average percentages of three nutrients in typical meals of people in the USA, which are harmful if consumed excessively.
Overall, the proportion of these nutrients, namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugar, is varying within different meals daily.
According to the figures, sodium and saturated fat undergo quite the same pattern in various meals, mostly found in dinner, by 43 and 37 percent respectively. Followed by lunch, which encompasses 29 percent sodium and 26 percent saturated fat. The third fat-rich meal is snacks by 21 percent and the fourth place belongs to breakfasts as the most fat-free meal, including only 16 percent of this nutrient. While snacks are also the third meal responsible for sodium, they stand at the same place with saturated fat by the share of 14 percent.
In contrast to dinner which is the least healthy meal in terms of sodium and fat, added sugar is mainly found in snacks, which accounts for 42 percent of this additive. The three other meals, dinner, lunch and breakfast, have proportions of 23, 19 and 16 respectively, as per sugar content.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'figures'' or 'figure's'?
Suggestion: figures'; figure's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94623655914 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52823116564 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 186.0 22.4926829268 827% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 920.0 112.824112599 815% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 186.0 22.9334400587 811% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 55.0 5.23603664747 1050% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120437956189 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120437956189 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986786455861 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622661627618 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 94.9 13.2329268293 717% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -100.39 61.2550243902 -164% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 73.5 10.3012195122 714% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.26 8.06136585366 202% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.4329268293 507% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 76.4 10.9970731707 695% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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