The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of people who worked in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 and 2010.
A cursory glance at the diagram is enough to make it clear that the major of total people working in town B worked in manufacturing both in 1960 and 2010.
As can be seen from the first diagram, in 1960, the figure for people working in manufacturing in town A accounted for 41%. Meanwhile, the number of people working in sales and services of this town was nearly the same, which were 30% and 29% respectively. However, in 2010, the figure for people working in manufacturing declined drastically to a fifth. In a similar fashion, the percentage of people working in sales halved in 2010. In contrast, the rate of people working in services witnessed a significant increase by more than a third.
As the second diagram suggests, in 1960, people working in manufacturing in town B took up a majority proportion which was 70%. In the meantime, people working in sales and services occupied 20% and 10% respectively. Nevertheless, the proportion of people working in manufacturing decreased by nearly a fifth in 2010. In the meanwhile, the number of people working in sales saw a slight growth to 22% in 2010. Similarly, the figure for people working in services presented a considerable rise to a quarter in 2010.
As a general trend, the rate of people working in manufacturing went down between 1960 and 2010, whereas the proportion of people working in services went up in the years given.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...turing declined drastically to a fifth. In a similar fashion, the percentage of people working in sa...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ople working in services went up in the years given.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 263.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78707224335 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91282548883 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406844106464 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6729036099 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456902633315 0.215688989381 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206173036526 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129095421385 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339064456329 0.15604864568 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144146462311 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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