The pie charts show usage of water for numerous ways in six different areas of the world, namely North America, South America, Africa, Europe, Central Asia, and South Asia. Overall, In undeveloped countries the most water usage is in agriculture part, while in affluent countries like North America and Europe the most water usage is about industrial use.
There are very similar pattern about three areas, namely Africa, Central Asia , and South Asia. They all are responsible for more than 80% of water usage to agriculture section, and also water sage for both other section are less than 20%. South America also followed similar pattern like three mentioned areas, unless the agriculture used 71% of whole, and domestic usage are more than those three areas.
Europe and North America also followed similar pattern with different percentage. For both Industrial usage of water ranked first, which means Europe and North America are responsible for 53%, 48% of whole their usage, respectively. Agriculture usage of Europe is less than North America by a margin of 7%, followed by domestic usage which took up more than a quarter of whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'patterns'?
Suggestion: patterns
...ndustrial use. There are very similar pattern about three areas, namely Africa, Centr...
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Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...three areas, namely Africa, Central Asia , and South Asia. They all are responsibl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11229946524 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35791338804 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5894328621 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11701309185 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593795488697 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584562558526 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918827862052 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529757550076 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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