The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The pie chart presents an overview of various water consumption in six different parts of the world.
Overall, as is seen from pies illustration, the water used for agriculture is worldwide except Europe and North America, where most of the water is utilized for industrial purposes. The last rate of water is used for domestic purposes in the Asia region, Africa, Europe, and North America.
Europe and North America have a significantly higher water consumption rate in industries taking up 53% and48%, respectively. In comparison, the proportion of water use in industrial and domestic purposes is less than 20% in combination in Asia region and Africa; only South America accounts for 29% in combination in the same purposes with the highest rate of domestic water use(19%).
Asia region (Central, South East), Africa and South America consumed almost third forth of water consumption for industrial purposes. In contrast, North America and Europe water utilized for the same purpose are 48% and 38% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29012345679 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83672031885 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524691358025 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9847879594 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276790844354 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150743354394 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701520860497 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194886952133 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529324285267 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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