The bar graph illustrated the employment rate of all man and woman workers separated by various occupations in the British in 2005. Overall, it can be seen that the majority of the females were interested in Administrative and Secretarial while skilled trade was the most popular job in among the males
Looking first at the male trend, being the highest, the percentage of the men working as a Skilled trade accounted for 20 %, leaving only 2 % of females in the same occupation far behind. The next ranks were Manager and Senior Official, Professional, Associate Professional, and Technical and Process, Plant and Machine operatives respectively, the two former were noted at around 16, and 14 % and the two latter was recorded at 11 %. Finally, the percentage of the male Personal Service was the lowest at about 3 %.
Turning to the female trend, Administrative and Secretarial accounted for the highest percentage at over 22 %, compared to only 15 % of Associate Professional and Technical and approximately 14 % of Personal Service. The fourth greatest percentage was Sales and Customer Service. Ultimately, the other career was ranged between approximately 11 % to 2 %.
- The bar chart below shows the employment of all male and female workers by occupation in the UK in the year 2005 63
- Growing population is a big problem in developing countries. Should Government provide new homes in the cities or countryside. 73
- Some people say that all students should study history as a major subject, while others feel that the other subjects are important for children in today’s society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment? 78
- The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 58
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28342245989 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12574967173 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.263483085 43.030603864 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.142857143 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.066568450818 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301036873743 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0187767795415 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438919783097 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170882893328 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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