The bar graph and pie chart elucidate the distinct causes of youngsters being the selection of education as well as how the expenditure of the study would be distributed among the people. Overall, it is palpable from the diagram that the adults choose to study due to the interest in the massive criterias of the education while it's mostly cost should be given by the individual. Discerning the bar graph, 20% of youngones select to study as they want to ameliorate their promotion and also feel convivial when they are doing their study. Apart from this, approximately 39% of the adults have attentiveness in their enormous subjects and want to elevate their academic knowledge. Surprisingly, the others means near to 11 percentile youngsters think that they are become able to modify their job status coupled with the interaction with the persons also increase. Moving further, the taxpayer should be shared the quarter of the pie chart as the expenditure of education. As along with, the individual and employer also should be faced the costs of study that is 40 and 35 in the form of percentile.
- Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in 2 years. 56
- Some people think that to spend or enjoy money once they earn it but others think that to save the money and to enjoy it in the future What stand do you agree with and Why Give the specific reasons and examples which support your opinion 88
- Topic: The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The maps below show the changes that have been taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91397849462 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74020607489 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2769529106 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193580196347 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912035585534 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654854125343 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193580196347 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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