The given below pie chart gives an insight about the sharing cost of per course and the provided bar chart illustrates the information about reasons why study is decided by adults.The vertical axis represents the several kind of reasons and the horizontal axis indicates the proportion of adult masses.The given below pie chart gives an insight about the cost of per course sharing.
First of all, less than 10% adults plan to study for meeting people.However,the main motive of 12% middle age people is to make themselves able for getting a new job.Whereas,20% adults give much more preference to study similarly because of two causes such as learning for amusement as well as studying and the ameliorate of promotion probability but the dedication in subjects and obtaining qualification are the topmost factors among adults to pay their attention towards study.
Furthermore, some people postulate that it is obligatory for the individuals to share 40% cost,while 35% cost should be provided by employers and the taxpayers should have to pay 25% remaining cost.
Overall, it is crystal clear from the bar chart that the adults more rather consider on academics than other reasons,Whereas individual share cost of each course is higher than other shares.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
... reasons why study is decided by adults.The vertical axis represents the several ki...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...adults.The vertical axis represents the several kind of reasons and the horizontal axis indi...
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...ndicates the proportion of adult masses.The given below pie chart gives an insight ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ndicates the proportion of adult masses.The given below pie chart gives an insight ...
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Suggestion: However
...adults plan to study for meeting people.However,the main motive of 12% middle age peopl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...plan to study for meeting people.However,the main motive of 12% middle age people is...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...e themselves able for getting a new job.Whereas,20% adults give much more preference to...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g for amusement as well as studying and the ameliorate of promotion probability but the dedica...
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Suggestion: , while
...ry for the individuals to share 40% cost,while 35% cost should be provided by employer...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Whereas
...consider on academics than other reasons,Whereas individual share cost of each course is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24630541872 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94248291954 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.493926976 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.25 112.824112599 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.75 22.9334400587 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 5.23603664747 559% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266970747825 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139579042264 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533650153892 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139579042264 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533650153892 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.2329268293 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 61.2550243902 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.3012195122 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.