The given flow chart clearly illustrates a detailed explanation of the life cycle of the salmon. In overall, this diagram will be divided into three following stages.
First of all, in the upper river with slow flowing, the adult salmon, which is 70 - 76 cm long, lays a number of salmon eggs in the water areas with a lot of reeds and small stones. It takes about 5 - 6 months for them to become the fry.
Next, the fry with the length of 3 - 8 cm goes down along the river to live in the lower river where the flow moving is faster in around 4 following years before developing the smolt.
Finally, the smolt whose length is approximately 12 - 15 cm will go to the sea where they live about 5 years and become the adult salmon. Then, the adult salmon will go back to the place where they were born to repeat their life cycle.
To sum up, there are three stages of the life cycle of the salmon which are mentioned - above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27428571429 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1366871785 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1359058843 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132671343635 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621811130666 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424299307214 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774894569447 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391096927218 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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