The given picture illustrates the life cycle of a product affecting the environment.
Overall,it can be seen that this circular process involves 7 main stages, commencing with planning and design and finishing with recycling.
Looking at details, firstly, the product manufaturing starts with planning and design. Once it is completed, the consumption of materials and energy resources take place, which is followed by manufacturing products. Next, the products are packaged and distributed to various shops. These steps consume natural resources and emit pollutants, which affects the environment detrimentally.
At the subsequent stage, the products are sold and used by the customers, who dispose or recycle these products when they are broken . After using them, inhabitants send feedback to the planning and designing part to improve the qualification of the products. If the customers dispose of the broken products, it will cause harm to the environment. However, recycling and moving to the consumption of materials and energy resources will reduce detrimental impact on the environment.
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment Why is this happening what are the solutions 56
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- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005 61
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 11
- The diagram gives information about the process of making pulp and paper Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70731707317 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09711794699 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1880924248 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895479830183 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362618710121 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397166715183 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668061019658 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403082923414 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.