The diagram depicts the process of electricity production in Hydroelectric Power Station. Overall, the process is divided into two parts, daytime process and nighttime process.
During the day, the process starts with water from River which flows into High-level Reservoir. It then passes through the Dam, which only opens at day, to the Power Station to produce electricity. Next, the Reversible Turbines powers the Generator to turn water into electricity, which is then sent into National Grid through the Power Lines. Lastly, the excess water then flows to the Low-level Reservoir.
At night, the process begins with the water from Low-level Reservoir which flows through the Reversible Turbines, which pumps the water into High-Level Reservoir. The water then stays on the pipeline before the Dam opens again at daylight. Next, when night finally turns into day, the water passes the Dam to the High-level reservoir, and the cycle begins again where water will flow again to generate electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, lastly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37974683544 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51940076755 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5838157972 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780071070677 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512539053765 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815881068636 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685011694204 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392024689457 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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