The picture depicts the creation of electricity utilizing the advantages of hydropower.
The process involves several stages during day and night, beginning with the storage of water which undergoes various steps to produce electricity for consumption and finishing with the return of water into its first place.
First of all, water flowing from the rivers is stored in a high-level reservoir which is isolated by the dam. During the daytime, the dam’s doors are opened letting water go through a big chamber before entering the powerstation. At this place, the pressure from the water creates a motivation to make the reversible turbines spin. As soon as the turbines start to move, electricity production is the final step which is done by the generator. After that, energy will be transported through the power lines to the national grid allocating to different households and companies.
Once the electricity is created, the remaining water is kept in another reservoir which is located in a lower place. At night, the aforementioned turbines will operate its second function of pumping the water back into its starting place. The intake doors will be closed when the water is fully filled, which is also the last step of the whole process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17156862745 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71238827844 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1774075224 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0429785474919 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.020402985858 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.017605444467 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0309468553031 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127712729409 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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