The picture gives information about the production of electricity in the Geothermal power plant from geothermal energy. It is being produced with the help of turbine, generator, pump and condenser.
Overall it can be seen that there are 5 major steps of electricity production. Water is pumped down to geothermal zone which is approximately 4.5 km and produced stem rotate the turbine. As Turbine rotates, generator produces electricity.
First cold water stored at ground level is pumped down around 4.5 km and it is passed through the injection well. it is then comes in contact with hot rocks. That zone is known as the Geothermal zone. It become very hot and then is is passed through the production well to the condenser.
After arriving it to condenser stem automatically hits the turbine from the upper chamber and the turbine starts to rotate. This turbine is connected to Generator. As the turbine rotates generator produces the electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t is passed through the injection well. it is then comes in contact with hot rocks...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...one is known as the Geothermal zone. It become very hot and then is is passed through ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...ermal zone. It become very hot and then is is passed through the production well to t...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...This turbine is connected to Generator. As the turbine rotates generator produces ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85670255835 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2875111776 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1666666667 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0619747145209 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028988106877 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431641033641 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414533331628 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263577866911 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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