The graph illustrates the process of making cup noodles.
Overall, there are 8 steps in producing cup noodles, with the first step having a flour truck putting flour into Storage Silos and the final steps labelling the cup noodle.
Firstly, the flour truck will load flour into Storage Silos to keep the flour uncontaminated and fresh. Next, the flour will then be put into a Mixer in order to be mixed into a dough, the mixer will mix the flour, alongside water and oil, to form a dough. Then, the mixed dough will come down from the bottom of the mixer into Rollers to turn them into a dough sheet.
After rolling the dough, the dough sheet will be put into a Dough Strips to make noodle strands. Then, they will be put through a Noodles Disc to shape the strands into circular disc that fit into a cup. Next, these discs will be cooked in oil then dried after they are finished being deep fried. After the noodles disc are dried they will be put into a cup with vegetables and spices. Finally, these noodle cups will then be labelled and sealled with instruction and nutrition fact on the labels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a cup. Next, these discs will be cooked in oil then dried after they are finishe...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'noodles'' or 'noodle's'?
Suggestion: noodles'; noodle's
...re finished being deep fried. After the noodles disc are dried they will be put into a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49751243781 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07315289395 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497512437811 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8959544277 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0325158533898 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200000721649 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247079190872 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0143196076198 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024802287942 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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