The diagram shows the various stages in the production of instant noodles from flour, water, and oil illustrated from scratch to the final stage.
First of all, the flour is conveyed from the storage silos by a truck to a factory and mixed with some ingredients such as oil and water. After that, the obtained dough is carried along a conveyor belt to have it stripped. Then, it is put in the noodles disks in the five stages, followed by cooking in oil and then dying phase. Following that, the noodles are ready to go to the cups, and vegetables with spices are added to them in this stage. The last phase of manufacturing noodles is sticking labels on them, then it is ready for distribution and public use.
To conclude, it is obvious that producing instant noodles accounts for several stages, from conveying by truck to mixing some ingredients, cutting, boiling, drying, and adding spices to labelling in order to make them ready for public use.
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 11
- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment 73
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 41
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 42
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74850299401 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47600264967 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4533999547 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17065849021 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740993708408 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686332082443 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126324718458 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613536005873 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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