The diagrammatical representation delineates the process of reutilization of rainwater for the household purposes through the enormous treatments. Generally, the rainfall water is accumulated into the dam. Afterwards, the drinking water is made through the transfering of water from the dam to the water treatment plant. Then, the water of rainfall is also collected in the rainwater tank which is used for the works of house. Following this, the household wastewater is gathered in the waste water treatment plant. Nextly, the again water after purification is transferred to the house from this tank. As along with, the stagnant water is moved to the river through the storm water treatment. Finally, the wastewater treatment also transmit the excessive water to the sea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...k which is used for the works of house. Following this, the household wastewater...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39669421488 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03009515941 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 106.607317073 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5903944661 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.625 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.017784328085 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00947501217084 0.103423049105 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0164112024822 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017784328085 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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