The diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The process demonstrates the way in which thermoelectricity is produced. Overall, there are four main stages of the production, beginning with coal and culminating with electricity transmitting in the electric wire.

The first stage of the electricity generating is coal heating. The stage begins with the coal supply system where coal is loaded on the conveyor belts to continuously move to the pulverizer. Following this, the mineral substance is compressed into coal powder. Having been crushed, the coal powder is carried to the boiler to be burned. As soon as the burning step produces heat, the heatwaves instantly follows the tube to the turbine for the second stage which is generating electricity. Besides, the dust exacted from the burning process is undergone an auxiliary stage. After the dust collection system accumulates all the muck, all the muck is released by a stack. Additionally, the ash is also handled by the ash solving system to disposal outside the manufacturing process. Back to the heat perspective, the heatwaves moves the turbine leading to the movement of the generator. Subsequently, the generator produces electricity which is stored in the substation or a transformer. These mentioned power stations are going to transmit electricity to the electric wire. While most of the heat wave’s purpose is turning the turbine, a minor amount of heat goes into the condenser. Then the heatwaves is cooled down by the cooling system which produces cold gas returning to reduce the temperature of the boiler.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o reduce the temperature of the boiler.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, second, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28979591837 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03701995588 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559183673469 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7074687848 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141438009908 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504860557014 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442177238446 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120638506013 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00115459826768 0.0819641961636 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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