The process manifests how to manufacture dairy products from cows’ milk for mercantile trade to people.
At the first stage, the cows pasture grasses on fields, then, they are deliveried to a special machine to take their milk. It takes place twice a day. Next, the milk is laid in the icebox to storage on a daily basis. Following this, the milk is put into tanker daily to transfer its to dairy where it is disinfected.
Afterwards, once this milk is conveyed to there, it is put through a process, called pasteurized. Subsequently, it has divergent products such as butter, cheese, cream. Finally, as soon as these products are done and packaged carefully, they are distributed to all supermarkets and shops where they are ready for consumptions.
Overall, this transaction encompasses eight steps, starting with grazing on grasses of the cows and ending with distribution at all supermarkets and shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09333333333 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90489242486 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.785536177 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18273483558 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720107921097 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631317406401 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113703676702 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803647477708 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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