The picture illustrates the manufacturing process of pasteurized milk and dairy products for sales.
Overall, before producing commercial products, milk, which is taken from well- maintained cows, is refrigerated and delivered to factories, where it is processed to end products. It is clear that delivered milk undergoes two pathways, which account for the resulting variation of the products.
First, cows should be grazed on well-maintained farm lands. Afterwards, milk is taken from them twice daily by a milking machine, and it is then stored in containers that have a very low temperature. After being refrigerated, milk is transported by milk tankers on a daily basis to sites where dairy is manufactured. Having been delivered, it is then processed to make either pasteurized milk or other dairy products. Before being ready to go to the shops and super markets for sale, pasteurized milk is canned, while other products, such as cheese, cream and butter, are packed accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, then, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07801796759 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2617431154 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216182462461 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101573111259 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705955295472 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170215528989 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061455648134 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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