The report aims to provide information about cement production progress along with the process used for manufacturing concrete for construction, the proper amount of ingredients is mentioned within the diagram.
Overall, the process is separated into two main stages which are cement-making and concrete production. Every stage is introduced with the necessary ingredients.
For the first procedure, depicting how to manufacture cement, cement is produced and packed. Firstly, initiating ingredients, limestone and clay, are powdered and mixed in a steel mixer. The mixture is then heated inside the rotating rod. After heated, it is put and spread for grinder, and lastly, the cement is sealed in a transport-safe packaging.
Moving on to the second figure, describing each stage and equipment for concrete production, cement, stones and other compositions are blended into construction concrete. The needed compounds are mixed with the proper proportion, 10% of water, 15% of cement, 25% of sands and the rest for building gravel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63694267516 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04391965632 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3301403798 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41436102205 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139143517746 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104012965514 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222462814043 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225818599375 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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