The diagram shows the procedures in the process of manufacturing yogurt. It involves of seven steps. Things needed are milk, yogurt starter, sugar, strawberries, apart from fridge and thermometer.
To begin with, milk is boiled in 90 degrees for 30 minutes. The longer the duration it is boiled, the better the yogurt is. Unlike the first step, the next step is of cooling wherein the milk is allowed to cool to a temperature of 44 degree Celsius followed by a step of adding yogurt starter. This step is the key of the process and maintains proper temperature is a priority. It is this step where the live bacteria curdles the milk to curd by a biological reaction. Keep the milk for four hours until its temperature starts to drop. At this point the product is subjected to refrigeration followed by adding the sugar and flavor to taste. Lastly, it is poured into containers and transported to desired places.
We have to be very careful with the temperature control as we can see at every step temperature has a different role to play.
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt. 11
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- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76373626374 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74400357311 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598901098901 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6805861478 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267987117265 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10145976339 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170538147678 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178422020704 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120635396605 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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