The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans

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The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans.

The given diagram details the step by step procedure showing how cocoa beans can be processed into various end products to be consumed by the consumer. The entire cycle passes through three major steps as discussed below.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the whole industrial process which starts with the collection of beans undergoes pressing, and refining to create the consumable products.

According to the given illustration, first of all, the whole cocoa beans collected by farmers are transported to the processing unit, where the drying process takes place. Next, a liquid consistency of cocoa beans is formed by pressing the dried shells. Subsequently, the cocoa liquor formed in the previous step gets ready for two different treatments: further pressing and refining.

In the former process, cocoa liquor is pressed further into a solid cake, which is then converted into consumable cocoa powder under the grinding machine, while a part of the cake is made into an industrial drink. In the latter process, industrial chocolate is mixed with sugar before it gets processed into desired products. Finally, the finished chocolate product is supplied to the consumer market.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., cocoa liquor is pressed further into a solid cake, which is then converted into...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, then, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66534391022 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6591392366 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.111111111 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409224135884 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146642267638 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103291387192 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23051635517 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138169908076 0.0819641961636 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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