The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram depicts information regarding the man-made process of rainwater collection in order to use for drinking in an Australian town. Overall, there are five steps in the process, beginning with the collection of rainwater on the rooftops of houses and ending with the distribution of potable drinking water into separate demanding houses.
At the initial stages of the process, rainwater slides off the rooftops and go into the drain system which is installed on the walls of the houses. Following this, a water filter beneath the ground is used to filtrate any sediments or impurities in the collected liquid. After that, the clean water moves through the pipe to a storage tank.
The next steps begin with the storage rainwater moving to a water treatment tank which has the same size as the storage, at this stage several chemicals are used to eliminate any bacteria or germs. Finally, the drinkable water pumps into another set of pipe systems that connects to each house and residents can access it through their water facets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02312138728 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53070951075 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5440947724 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348628598554 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155382156811 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15539949606 0.0843802449381 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235125301578 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146200871703 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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