The diagrams illustrate the location of Eiffel Tower, which would be extended with underground beneath it, and the plan’s project.
Eiffel Tower is placed in the west of Paris town and is located between Ecole Militaire’s building and Seine’s river. It is a metal structure that has 324 m height and 10.100 tones weight. Moreover, There are 1665 steps to reach two viewing platform that Eiffel Tower have. If it is measured from the ground, While the distance to first platform is 57 m, the second ones has 115 m height.
Looking for more details, Eiffel tower whose two tower’s foundations are planned to have five floors, two lifts –used to transfer passenger from one floor to others–, and glass ceiling positioned above the first floor that will consist of ticket office and access to tower. Following this, there are second level and third level that the former will contain shops and restaurants although the latter will connect to cinema and museum. Lastly, not only will parking lot be located in fourth level, but fifth level as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'platform' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'platforms'.
Suggestion: platforms
...ere are 1665 steps to reach two viewing platform that Eiffel Tower have. If it is measur...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'park'
Suggestion: park
...inema and museum. Lastly, not only will parking lot be located in fourth level, but fif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04494382022 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52846439174 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1520981441 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170494891457 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709500837092 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872615568025 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14355206336 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881518980677 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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