The graphic is of a system which produces energy from ocean waves and options for its locations. Overall, energy is generated by a spinning turbine and the output depends on its locations.
As can be seen from the picture, the system has two chambers in which one of them is put halfway in the water and the other contains a turbine connected with an energy generator. Firstly, due to moving waves, the water level would rise up and create an air flow which moves up to the upper room, sets the turbine to a rational motion and then escapes through an open space. Simultaneously, a reverse flow of the air from the upper chamber also enables the turbine to spin. As a result, electricity is produced by the circle motion of the turbine through a generator.
In regard to the location, there are two options to set up a wave energy machine. While offshore built-up systems can deliver a large amount of energy with the help from large waves, the systems that are set up onshore produce a lower output but are less costly to install than the former.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...other contains a turbine connected with a energy generator. Firstly, due to movin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, then, while, as a result, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51776649746 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40889553659 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532994923858 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6297226972 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820464580291 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501342215515 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570291410965 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761182001229 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566409979465 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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