The pictures illustrate the silkworm’s cycle of life and the process by which silk cloth is produced.
Overall, it is clear that whereas the life cycle of the silkworm consists of four stages, the production of silk cloth is made up of 5 or 6 steps.
Regarding the silkworm’s life cycle, after a moth has laid its eggs, a period of ten days should pass until the silkworm larva is created. Next, this larva eats mulberry leaves for about 4-6 weeks in order to make silk threads. Then, these threads turn into a cocoon, which usually takes 3-8 days. The process ends after approximately 16 days when the cocoon becomes a moth.
To produce a silk cloth, firstly, cocoons are selected and boiled in water. Following this, they are unwound, by which threads are created of approximately 300-900 meters long. Having done that, the threads could be died if needed, after which they are twisted and then, finally, weaved.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 84
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.Summ 96
- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56679295829 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6421183305 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247476659695 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10412321757 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126158197643 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196980832793 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126643425183 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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