The diagrams below give information with regard to creation of cocoons and the process of making silk cloth.
According to the first diagram it is demonstrated that eggs are laid by moth and they turn to silkworms (larva) at the end of the day tenth. These worms feed on mulberry leaves and up to approximately 6 weeks, their bodies are covered by silk threads that are produced by them. However, after at least 8, these covers transform to cocoon. AS long as they are not used for silk cloth producing, by passing 16 days a mature moth emerge from inside of that.
By the following stage, there are five steps with respect to production of silk cloth. In advance, the selected cocoons are poured into the container filled with water and boiled until its unwanted materials are separated. Next, prior to twisting and weaving, cocoons should be unwound and alter to the silk thread. The length of each one varies from 300 to 900 meter long. Eventually, after performing twisting an weaving, they are prepare for dyeing.
To sum up, it is distinctively depicted that over 10 weeks is needed for production of a cocoon, although the process of making silk cloth is not that much sophisticated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...ngth of each one varies from 300 to 900 meter long. Eventually, after performing twis...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
.... Eventually, after performing twisting an weaving, they are prepare for dyeing. ...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
...erforming twisting an weaving, they are prepare for dyeing. To sum up, it is distinc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, at least, to sum up, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79710144928 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55268187242 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1595672259 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227394801488 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813088230526 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891849856549 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144961815847 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470692576242 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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