The diagrams give information about the life cycle of the salmon, which is a kind of large fish. Overall, salmon life cycle could be separate into three stages, which are fry, smelt and adult salmon.
At beginning, adult salmons lay eggs under the reeds and small stones at upper river with slow flowing, staying at upper river for approximately 5 to 6 months. While fries, new-born salmons with 3 to 8-centimeter-long, come out from the salmon eggs, they would go down to the fast-moving lower river, living there for about 4 years.
The smolts then go downstream to the open sea after they alternating to the stage of 'smolt', the 12 to 15-centimetre-long little salmon. They stay at the ocean for 5 years, while they turns to the next stage ' adult salmons'. After the periods, they grow up as the adult, with approximately 70 to 76-centimeter-long bodies. The mature salmons, meanwhile, go back to the upper river and lay eggs and the life cycle start again.
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- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fried'.
Suggestion: fried
...e separate into three stages, which are fry, smelt and adult salmon. At beginni...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
...ay at the ocean for 5 years, while they turns to the next stage adult salmons. After...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ears, while they turns to the next stage adult salmons. After the periods, they g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80722891566 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89823528128 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2982569631 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130984306792 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752972910896 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992109052053 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113874960792 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103654553249 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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