The figures summarize life period of the salmon, a species of a kind of a fish groups.
The first step of life cycle is hatching out the eggs laying under the reeds in a slow moving river among stones after about 5-6 month period of times. It seems that they have a size of 3-8 cm in the beginning of their life when start to live in a fast flowing part of the river for about 4 years before becoming smolt. By changing from fry to smolt, their body size changes from 3-8 cm to 12-15 cm, leading to approximately 9-12 cm surge in their body size.
The last life span relates to their adulthood, meaning that after smolt duration, they live in open seas for about 5 years, changing their size to 70-76 cm. Finally, the eggs are laid down in the bottom of the river by adult salmon in order to complete their 10 years life cycle.
To sum up, life cycle of salmon begins from egg in the slow moving river to life duration in the open sea, and it contains 3 specific steps, completing their life period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...fe period of the salmon, a species of a kind of a fish groups. The first step of life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, as for, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28272251309 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06030089541 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.3488424558 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104019094112 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667885537631 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589781821954 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978678878063 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578932990231 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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