The illustrations indicate developing cell phones in two phases.
Overall, early mobile phone and contemporary mobile phone is shown in the illustration. Both phones have display keyboard and ear phone.
The weight of early mobile phone is 150g. Width of it is 50mm while length is 130. It has ear phone at the top. It also has black/ white display in the upper half of mobile phone. Function elect button is located in the center. At the bottom of the early mobile phone is keyboard with buttons.
Contemporary mobile phone weights a twice less than early mobile phone and amount to 70g. The parameter of contemporary mobile phone is also less than previous phone generation and consist 40mm width and 90 mm length. The new generation of phones is bent in the middle and contain of two parts. Upper parts has ear phone at the top and full colour display which cover almost all upper part. Moreover, it has camera with video capability. Extra functions are applied for function button, which are e-mail and internet, music player, and multi-player game facility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...player, and multi-player game facility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94475138122 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47670382602 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1517104511 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181596042031 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076120385878 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564803668689 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143736894077 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180660821613 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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