The chart illustrates demographic trends of people who lives in Scotland ranging from 1940 to 2020 in terms of birth rate, population growth rate and death rate.
Overall, the percentage of population growth and birth rates seemed to similar changing which fluctuated remarkably. Besides, after dramatical declined, the percentage of death ratio remained the same for many years.
First of all, the percentage of birth rate seem to higher than death rate, it was highest level in 1940 around by 2.5 %, the difference was 1.5% as well. Over the following three years, the percentage of birth and population growth had a little fluctuation, followed by gradually rose in 1980 with around 1,5%. When it comes to death rate, after reaching highest level in 1940 which is around 1,5%, there was a dramatical fall between 1940 and 1950. Following the next 3 years, death rate levelled off.
Secondly, the percentage of birth started to fall slightly since 1990. After rising slightly between 1990 and 2000, it fell gradually thereafter. Also, after falling steadily between 1980 and 1990, the death rate lived in Scotland levelled off at under %1 since at the beginning of 2010, followed by started to rise modestly in 2020. When it comes to the population growth ratio, there was slightly go down in 1990, followed by it remained stable around by 0% and reached its lowest point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02183406114 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4967123941 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528384279476 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.26343984 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493221529033 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191571239487 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476041261662 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470757928821 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679800476616 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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