The information about the usage of energy in an average house and the carbon gas emissions because of this power use in Australia is depicted by the rendered pie charts. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
To begin with, the consumption of average energy is by heating in Australian household, which is 42%. However, water heating use 30% of the energy in the house. Moreover, 7% and 15% of power utilization for refrigeration and other appliances respectively. The lowest energy utilizes in cooling and lighting, accounted for 2% and 4%.
Moving towards, the percentage of carbon dioxide released from the usage of water heating and other appliances is similar in Australian household, it comprised for 32% and 28% correspondingly. Only 3% of carbon dioxide gas released because of the consumption of cooling. Although the percentage of carbon emission by reason of heating energy utilization, which is 15%, the difference between this and the refrigeration category is only 1%, it accounted for 14%. 8% of released greenhouse gas from the utilization for lighting.
To sum up, it can be vividly manifested that nearly half of the consumption of average energy is by heating in an Australian household.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20304568528 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09742016819 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492385786802 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4428190942 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240874748311 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966200729233 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071341411336 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16038761793 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312215505697 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.