The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided pie charts illustrate the usage of energy as well as the emission of greenhouse gas from the energy consumption in a common household in Australia.
Although heating needs the most percentage of energy to be produced, it creates less greenhouse gas when compared to water heating. Contrastingly, cooling and lighting need less energy to run and similarly they produce less greenhouse gas.
According to the first pie chart, Australians use most of their household energy in producing heat (42%) whereas only 2% of the power is utilized for cooling purposes. Water can be warmed at the 30% expanse of energy. While refrigeration and lighting can cost just 11% of the energy combinedly (7% and 4% respectfully), other appliances need to use 15% of it.
Water heaters as well as other appliances emit most amount of greenhouse gases in Australia, 32% and 28% individually. On the other hand, refrigerators produce 14% of the gas while heating produces 15%. Lighting (8%) and cooling (3%) emit least amount of greenhouse gas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'emit the least'.
Suggestion: emit the least
...roduces 15%. Lighting 8% and cooling 3% emit least amount of greenhouse gas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, similarly, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09411764706 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93849289338 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6861381369 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221951724665 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094231732662 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824059517201 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152413435789 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807578777779 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.