The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compar

The pie charts compare the share of five major sources of energy consumption and gas emission in an Australian household.

Overall, the most significant proportion of energy is generally allocated to heating, followed by water heating. However, the latter is responsible for the largest amount of gas emitted.

Regarding the energy consumption, the highest percentage of energy is usually used for heating with just above 40%, which is considerably higher than that used for water heating (30%). Moreover, refrigerators consume nowhere near as high as heating, contributing to only 7% among all. There is a little difference between the figures for lighting and cooling, as the former accounts for merely 4%, while the share of the latter is lower by a margin of 2%. The remaining 15% is allocated to a variety of other appliances.

Turning to the gas emission, water heaters are responsible for the most significant share of the gas emission with 32%. Furthermore, heating and refrigeration comprise similar proportion and together contribute to the one-third of gas production. However, lighting and cooling produce the lowest percentage, at 8% and 3%, respectively. Finally, other appliances have also a considerable role in gas emission with 15%.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38578680203 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04551606975 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.828101995 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169923646423 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592778902154 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821852619415 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124978644056 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915610216714 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.