The flowchart shows how concentrated apple juice is produced.

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The flowchart shows how concentrated apple juice is produced.

The flowchart provide reveal information about the way of apple juice is produced.

Overall, there are ten stages in whole of the producing process, beginning with the collected apple from farmland and ending with delivery of the juice to the consumers.

At the first step, the apples are collected from farmland. Then, washed, and category based on the quality. A roller assist in this process. Apples are sliced by the grinder before delivery to the pressure machine in order to separate water from apple concentration. After that, a chemical substance called Aroma is added to concentration. The juice after became filter is exposed to a temperature of 80°C in order to pasteurization.

In the subsequent stage, the bottles which are placed on the roller, filled by the syrups. Finally, the apple juices are packed and delivered to the market for people consuming.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2676056338 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77896996612 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2080636422 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23737772748 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839834605669 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995769982104 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163149300209 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102701006212 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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