The line and Bar graph illustrate average monthly rainfall and temperature in one of region on east Africa.
Looking from overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there was slight upward trend in rainfall towards the end of period Despite showing fluctuations in the middle months of year. In Comparison, Temperature in region was declined.
Initially, In January month, 20 millimeters rainfall was recorded and significantly increased till March month showing number around 90 millimeters. However, there was dramatic increase in rainfall in April month which was about 275 millimeters. When it comes to May, June months, rainfall slumped to 130, 10 millimeters respectively. In July, august and September months, rainfall numbers are approximately 5,10, 15 millimeters respectively. rainfall was increased suddenly in October month and continued to increase till November month and again rainfall in region plummeted to 50 millimeters in December, at the end of period.
On the other hand, Approximately, 22.5 degrees of temperature reported in Jan month and continued to increase till march month was about 23.5 degrees whereas there was a downward trend in temperature from march to July, which showed around 21 and temperature are drastically increased until October and hitting highest point and possess 23.5 . However, again there was a downward trend and ended in December with 21.5 degrees of temperature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 444, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rainfall
...tely 5,10, 15 millimeters respectively. rainfall was increased suddenly in October month...
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Line 8, column 304, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'hitting the highest'.
Suggestion: hitting the highest
...drastically increased until October and hitting highest point and possess 23.5 . However, again...
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Line 8, column 342, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d hitting highest point and possess 23.5 . However, again there was a downward tre...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57339449541 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00736847295 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536697247706 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0253124005 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292106307641 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14448582348 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169485432796 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260541390134 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.21620555111 0.0819641961636 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.