The line graph below illustrates how the Energy Consumption by Fuel was changing since 1980. It also estimates trends up to 2030.
Between 1980 and 1996 the figure characterized consumption of petrol and oil experienced some fluctuations from 35 units to approximately 32 units in 1996, then we can see a steady growth to 44 units in 2018. An upward trend to 40 units is also projected until 2030.
Speaking about coal and natural gas, they both had insignificant fluctuations and a gradual rise from 16 units for coal and 20 for gas in 1980 to 27 and 26 units respectively by 2018. However, while figure for natural gas will remain constant, the figure for coal will reached 30 units by 2030.
As for alternative type of energy, they witnessed a slow increase from 4 units in 1980 to 6 for nuclear power and 4.5 for solar/wind and a drop from 4 units to 3 for hydropower until now. In the next 12 years, it is predicted that the consumption of this types of energy will stay stable.
Overall, the graph suggests that consumption of all types of energy was growing throughout the whole period and it will continue to rise until 2030.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrates how the Energy Consum...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reach'
Suggestion: reach
...main constant, the figure for coal will reached 30 units by 2030. As for alternative ...
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Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...it is predicted that the consumption of this types of energy will stay stable. Over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, while, as for, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6157635468 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71635460655 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566502463054 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8704397168 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150365288679 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773915230148 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499848449095 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103090527519 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477525142961 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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