The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph compares the number of unused materials from 3 different organizations from the year 2000 to 2015, where it is measured in tonnes.

Overall, The production of unwanted materials is gradually raising in company C, whereas A and B are significantly reducing it throughout the period.

According to the graph, company A, B, and C have 12, just less than 9, and almost 4 tonnes of unused products respectively in the year 2000. A was the maximum, and C was the minimum waste producing company during that time. After 5 years B and C increased slightly by 3 tonnes, while company A has a constant reduction by a ton.

Afterward, B started to drop its value drastically, where A is constantly growing down and C is peaking. In the year 2010, B and C have the same production level of 7 tonnes, also in 2014, A and B has an equal value of nearly 8 tonnes. Finally, B drops drastically and reduce its unwanted production to 3 tonnes, even A reduces it by 4 tonnes but C raise its production by 9 tonnes. The company C dominates all other in manufacturing waste and B dropped it and become the least waste producer by the end.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A redux' or simply 'reduces'?
Suggestion: A redux; Reduces
...s unwanted production to 3 tonnes, even A reduces it by 4 tonnes but C raise its producti...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51941747573 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91063443555 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6794833887 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116338343319 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547863053707 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424891787172 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07331961164 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215584543115 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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