The graph below shows the annual water uses by industries in some countries

Grammar and spelling errors:
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the bar graph depicts how much water is use...
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...es in some country. Unit is measured in million of cubic metres. Overall,ground wa...
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...and fuel and textile respectively. in the case of ground water ,metal industr...
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...tively. in the case of ground water ,metal industries utilised fourfold wate...
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...ater ,metal industries utilised fourfold water than textile industries ,240 and 6...
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... fourfold water than textile industries ,240 and 60 respectively. Chemicals indus...
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...ount of water for430 .On the other hand ,the lowest water used in machinery indus...
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... water used in machinery industry, while paper industries used slight above ,food...
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...hile paper industries used slight above ,food and drinks for causes which was 190...
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... drinks for causes which was 190 and 110 ,whereas fuel utilised 70 millions of cub...
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... was 190 and 110 ,whereas fuel utilised 70 millions of cubic metres water. in terms of pu...
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...sed in fuel and textiles with 240 and 10 ,while fuel and textile industries used s...
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...and 90. Food and drinks industries used 190 millions of cubic metres water and 20 millions of c...
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... 190 millions of cubic metres water and 20 millions of cubic metres water used for paper makin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21578947368 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49020797004 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468421052632 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9354166381 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316023281737 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179389806402 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885065993307 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22767789624 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542719277261 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.