The bar graph provides information about the percentage and contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services- from 1900 to 2000.
We can see from the data that agriculture sector's share was significantly more than other sectors'. In 1950, while its percentage was approximately 50, manufacturing was almost 38. On the other hand, business and financial sector had the lowest ratio with 8%. If we compare business and financial sectors through the years, the difference between 1900 and 1950 was too neglectable but from 1950 to 2000, change was very dramatic, sharply. In 2000, it was the most competitive sectors than others. Especially, agriculture's change was considerably significant between 1950 and 2000. Manufacturing's change fell steadily until 1975 but decrease was more sudden between 1975 and 2000. Although agriculture and business and financial sectors took important ratio in 1900s, their percentage fell and persons' interest shifted to business sector through the years. Manufacturing was still second important sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 757, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1900s'.
Suggestion: in the 1900s
... financial sectors took important ratio in 1900s, their percentage fell and persons inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, still, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72049689441 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03511055028 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3739379828 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14875077696 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727025328659 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086933296739 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194941730084 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103547634751 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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