The chart depicts information regarding the electricity consumption in UK on an average day during winter and summer seasons. Whereas, the diagram stipulates details about for what purpose this electricity is being used.
It is clear from chart that electricity use was very high during winter season and was almost double the figures of summer consumption. The power usage was comparatively low between the hours of 6 to 9 which was 31000 units of electricity. After that it showed a steep rise till the 21 hours, where the consumption reached its peak point of 49000 units. At the end usage was drastically reduced to 34000 just after 3 hours of peak time.
On there hand, summer usage is comparatively low as compared to former. The power intake was low (12000 units) during the time of 6 to 9 hours just like the winter season. Interesting point to note that, during the hours of 13 and 23, the UK residents consumed same units (20000) of electricity. Also that was the hight of that season. But after this time the intake pattern showed a declining trend.
It is evident from the diagram that major portion of the winter electricity was consumed for heating rooms and water (52.5%) followed by vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools. While almost same proportion of power (15%) was used for kitchen equipments like ovens and kettles and electronic devices like TV and radio.
In conclusion, UK residents consumed more electricity during winter season due to the extreme weather condition and the larger portion of this electricity was consumed for heating requirements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...ring the time of 6 to 9 hours just like the winter season. Interesting point to note that, during...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nsumed same units 20000 of electricity. Also that was the hight of that season. But ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01893939394 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67008379116 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.946767334 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24147331983 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853131365309 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863583856892 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154405829992 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713994957031 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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